Captured And Tamed - Part 03
Thanks again for looking at this story and a big thank you to 'chafalcar' and 'duffin' for your comments, and he will watch out for that past and present tense thing, thanks for pointing it out duffin ^\_^ at the moment he is having trouble signing into
A Tale of a Naughty Squirrel Lass
Be warn, there are multiple grammer mistakes (ex: has, had, past tense, present tense...etc). also, there are all too young characters here as well.
Disorder: Book Eight (erotic eBook teaser)
Note: this story is in second-person point of view and present tense.
Peacekeepers: Prologue
Looking back on avenger i noticed a lot of the writing was done in the past tense, so i am attempting to keep things more present tense. of course, while i do try to write that way, i might miss it in a few places.
Tails' Trouble - Chapter 1 - To Steal From Thieves
I switched from past to present tense all over, and even had a few first person perspective thrown in there! ugh... looking at my old stories hurt.
Supernatural Transformation: Fetish Extreme (erotic eBook teaser)
Note: this story is in second-person point of view and present tense.
Leviathan 01: Name of the Game
For one, it's written in present tense. i think it'll help capture a certain immediacy i'm going for, so hopefully it works out.
Bastion - Pt. 1
_i have a terrible habit of switching between past tense and present tense. i try to go back and fix it, but i'm sure i miss some.i write for fun, and have no plan when i write. when i sit down and start typing, i just go.
The Ulimate Weapon
Dennis wasn't sure whether the present tense was from grief, or just bad grammar. "what?" dennis asked. "you must sleep," he replied, "look tired." dennis wasn't feeling very tired, as adrenaline still burned in him.
Sissy school
Be aware that i am french and as such i have sometimes a hard time with sentences, and that also suffer from a problem that plague me also in french : i write in a weird past - present tense combo that is not the best tense for stories.
For Love of Love 9: A New Begenning
The use of present tense bothered her, sharply reminding her again that she was no longer in the service of her order. "this must all be old stuff to you." "not really," she answered.
Shield
present tense. never mind how. it just is. there was ... there's an emotional ‘something' there. a foundation of ‘something.' and there clearly isn't anything with collie. and yet ... ... i suddenly think i know how peyton feels.