Editing
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First Times & Heat Rhymes Part One: Commision from Amethyst Mare
Lightly edited first times & heat rhymes part one written by amerthyst mare (arian mabe) for duncan 213 late summer 1934 still and quiet, the grey wolf embraced the night.
First Times & Heat Rhymes Part Two: Commisioned by Amethyst Mare
First time and Heat Rhymes Part Two Written by Amethyst Mare (Arian Mabe) for Duncan 213 Three months latter: Halloween night 1934 Halloween was Bethany's favourite day of the year, not simply because it was her birthday. What was better then...
Boring Mall Day (edit)
This is a edited version by jami31 that i have on fur-affinity i would delete the old one but i don't want people to wonder why it is missing right away, also i had no luck in re editing that one with this sorry for confusion it was a normal
Silver Stream Memory 31
"No," I responded almost yawning with a sigh. "You're throwing away too much needed things," Cardia phased in protesting. "Awww.... shuddap. You broke your silence," I snapped at him gritting my teeth. "But!" Cardia started to say. "Shut up!" I...
Silver Stream Memory 29
"This might be fun," I remarked to Ava. I looked out toward the lake and western side of town. I turned back toward the others and spoke entranced, "Whatever happens this day and on forward we will know this day we stood and looked at everything as...
Silver Stream Memory 28
SS Particle 28 The time became inevitable as time did. I thought such thoughts as I stared into space from the disc of Silver by the Spindle Pillar. I stepped down into the silver stream and proceeded to the spindle core where the light...
Silver Stream Memory 27
"Where is Sophie anyways?" "I'm in here!" I heard a voice from the living room. I continued into the other room and gasped but quickly smiled. THere was Sophie with a bag of chips in one paw and the TV clicker in another. Her belly was out before...
Silver Stream Memory 30
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Collector's Edition
Steel adjusted his classes as he looked down at the book in front of him, studying the glyphs as he wrote down what seemed to be another conjuncture of the astral that he could use in order to augment his powers. While the foxjay had the ability...
Revenge Edited
#2 of revenged well this is now the edited version, changed the intro, made some difference into the yiff scene as well as the ending. enjoy. again not for anyone under 18. drake and manuel copyrighted by me.
Edited for Pleasure
**Warning:** This story contains strange scenes of a sexual nature. If you are not of the appropriate age or do not like the tags listed, do not read. I take no responsibility for the viewing of this material. **Legal: ** The characters portrayed and...