Mizalin-on-Sky: Boulder Trouble
From behind, jarzyl could hear caden providing a running commentary to glecion, describing the situation since the blind fledgling couldn't see what was going on. "...standing on the boulder fully.
A.W.E (Anthropomorphic Wrestling Entertainment) Chapter 2
He went around the ring to the timekeeper who sat next to the commentary table, handing his headphones over to the hyena.
Cyanide of Riddance chapter 15.
You know, like social commentary. everybody's knows that these days, if you want to be raunchy and serious on the internet, you need to also be relentlessly preachy." "too bad we never had a point," icicle said. "hey! know what you should do?
Cthulhu's Grasp
I'll also state outright that while i imagined cthulhu as the beast in the fog, i couldn't help but throw in my own commentary. the entire poem is a subtle stab at the cult of marxist/leftist ideology that seems to be in vogue.
COMMISSION: A Serious Battle: Pinkie Pie vs Applejack
The pink mare barely raised a hand to block a hard shot, despite her commentary, to aj's surprise. it looked like she'd need to fight smart despite the trolling.
Defense of Home
The soldier panted softly as he leaned against the sandbag barricade that was established long before the fighting became this bad. He was slumped over it, as if he had been killed in action. Luckily, that wasn't the case, but he had been close to...
War of Spirits: Manual.
War of the Spirits is monster battle game with some card battle features. It was discovered in the world of Neos, it was believed that in ancient times, that the Lord of Spirits and the God of Man, consulted to allow the creatures called Spirits to...
Might Be Retiring From TOTGM For A While
While each chapter is certainly read by pretty descent numbers, there's a definite lack of commentary on the series and it has led me to feeling things aren't interesting enough for readers to find things/moments worth commenting on after they've read.
Paper, Plastic, or Tire Iron. (Otherwise Untitled)
~ as she let the snacks and drinks cascade onto the counter, the brown bear made sure to square up her shoulders while she pretended to not notice the cashier's grip on the tire iron while providing commentary to the coyote's glances
Newfound Purposes: Prologue
:d the format for the story is as follows: <_____> - commentary from the main character, i.e. what he's thinking.______ - denotes a noise. for example. the ball flew straight at the window. crash "______" - someone is saying something.
IT: Infant Tech | Chapter 6 [Comm]
The experience in of itself felt almost degrading, but accompanied by yuri's infantilizing commentary made bolt feel as if he wanted to dig himself a hole in the ground and bury himself in it forever.
Yip Yap! Understanding Your Fellow Kobold
**Yip Yap!** **An Instructive Guide to Understanding Your Fellow Kobold** By Gregory Pikitas **_An Introduction_** Alright, alright. So the title might need a teensy bit of work. A little extra flair. Something else--anything else besides what it...