Only Human (revised), Chapter 3
So, here is chapter 3 of the revision of only human. enjoy. * * * the halls of the station seemed about how nathan expected, just wide enough for two to walk abreast with pristine white walls and an occasional terminal.
Collared - Chapter 22 - Revision
The day would begin and end quietly, as a leaf caught in a maelstrom might be picked up and whisked off somewhere far away, with no idea of how to return to where from it came. The middle would be loud, and at the end of the day, would leave those...
The Beastmaker's War - AIR
As i am sure most of you have heard, i bring a revised treaty before you this time.
Evolution Complete
I snatched at the hand and pulled it between my warm wet thighs "if you want to rub something rub here" i told him and passive voice (consider revising) by my own voice...
An Adventure of a Life Time Chapter 1: Reality
Hello sofurry this is shade, this will be a revised version of my first chapter of this story. the title is no longer “needed trust" and is now “an adventure of a lifetime".
Luke Chapter 2 (Revisited)
#1 of luke (revisited) a revised version of an old story, bringing an old work into a new writing style.
#SimplyPurrfect (Revised Edition)
#3 of stories (transformation) the exact same story, but heavily revised since i'm trying to improve my writing skills. i should start from the beginning.
Guardians: Downfall Chapter 1
Alright, so, went back, revised a few things, paragraphs need to be moved apart a little more, but spelling has been checked. redid and merged in chapter 1 and 2 to make chapter 1. hope you guys like it!
Tropical Revised - Chapter Ten
"Are you two all packed?" questioned the wolf, Nate sneaking up behind the otters in the crowded hallway. The final bell for the school day had just wrung, and with no school following next week because of Chymerage, the students were more than excited...
Canines' Autumn Ch. 1: Showdown
A revision from an very early work on fa which was also revised :p . meeting each other for the first time, kouya and ten have a showdown stemming from one miscommunication.
Demons
#4 of don't leave me - seasons one & two samson finds himself confronting some of his deepest fears.authors note dlm is currently undergoing revisions so please excuse the mess.
A Night In The City
When the law was revised to cover only ingestion of prey, new forms of ingestion appeared as predators craved the kill more than they needed it. creativity became the norm, and the unthinkable became the every-day.