Magnus Chronicles: Ancients Awakening: Chapter 5
This is definitely the most dialogue heavy chapter i have written so far. as always, i'm very appreciative of critiques and constructive feedback.
Journals of a Dark Elf Dancer: Chapter 5
As a result, this is a fairly dialogue heavy chapter. so to soften the blow, let's start off with some sex! ^\_^ critiques are welcome, as i am not entirely comfortable with dialogue.
Jayden, Chapter 3
#3 of the halfblood chapter three (duh) this is my first dialogue heavy chapter, so any tips there would be helpful...
MHO - The Cult of the Crimson Isles - Chapter 15
Somewhat dialogue-heavy again- but hey, this group has plenty to talk about! also, please make sure to read the author's note.
(C) Black and Blue and White
dialog heavy, leading to lots of edging, light bdsm, and strangling. was a fun time to write this. it's the farthest forward in jenasys' canon timeline that i ever have written. i'll get to her origin some day.
50 Shades of Cream Chapter 2 (Tails x Sally x Vanilla)
Gaging slightly at the base she still kept her composure however and slowly reversed back up to the tip before releasing him again "only thing is you won't know which one of us you're fucking" speaking heavy and distorted half sentences as his mind battled
Learning to Swim - Part IV
It's a tad dialog heavy but i also just tend to be that way sometimes. there's a lot of branching out here and it's fun developing these characters. anyway, i hope you enjoy the continuation of the story.
Black Meridian 04: Borderlands
This one is a bit longer than the others, and it's very dialogue heavy. but it felt wrong to break it up into other chapters, it's all a series of moments that play into one another so i'd rather post 6000 words and retain that authenticity.
MHO - The Cult of the Crimson Isles - Chapter 17
#66 of mystic heart odyssey one more dialogue-heavy chapter before we get back to some more action-focused stuff! hope you enjoy these bits of character interaction and lore. also double-lol at me ever saying this would be the shortest episode yet.
Hammered and Sickled [RP Log]
Not wanting to seem out of place, julya smoothed out and adjusted every bit of decorum on her uniform, talking heavy steps down the hallway natalya walked out of.
The Mercurius Express — Chapter 2
The conversation heavy atmosphere for the past few hours was getting a bit too much for him. he needed somewhere where he could sit back and think, preferably in a calm and quiet place.
Dual Fittings
Just to let you all know, there's a lot of lore and history in this one, but it was fun to write a character/dialogue heavy piece. just go with it and enjoy the kinkiness!