Words That Feel – A 5-Day Emotional Writing Practice (Free PDF Tool)
Hi everyone! I'm thrilled to share something I've been quietly working on behind the scenes: Words That Feel — a free 5-day emotional writing practice for storytellers who want to strengthen their voice and connect more deeply with their...
Tail, Language, Show, Don't tell!
_ **A study on behaviour, fulfilling and sweet.** _ **_A Lifetime measured in moments looking._** _ **A waiting to meet.** _ In between the isles of the D'hole foods market, a white fox did bob and weave. Through the thrumming cacophony of...
As you know Bob, show don't tell: Srsly (7 shows, no tells!)
#1 of srsly **as you know bob, show don't tell: srsly (7 shows, no tells!)** you will hear this time and time again and it is very important you understand this; show, don't tell. if you tell you are clearly... **7.
Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
I'll focus on the biggest one first, and that's the common 'show don't tell' mantra.
Indecent
"show don't tell, eh? fucking urges." she sank her head into her palms and took a deep, quaking breath. "this is not me. but the current me wants it. needs it. agh!" she growled. "i'm a virgin," i blurted out.
Writing Tips vol. 2
show, don't tell. if all you are doing is stating that something has happened, things sound rather flat. i'll write that same scene again, removing the majority of the figurative speech.
Serenifi: Just Married!
"show, don't tell." half an hour later... the limo soon pulled up, and serenity and fifi stepped out in front of a magnificent mansion, with statues made of marble, granite, and/or ice, portraying either of the brides in the nude.
Presentation - Writing Style
**show, don't tell** it took me forever to figure out what this means. don't say, "jack went and bought some bread on a hot day." show us... tell the story...
Exploring the Space - Kinktober 2021, Day 6
The ultimate show, don't tell. and... the most incredible part, it's interactive. by witnessing this, by enjoying it, we become a part of the performance. our racing hearts, our wet pussies and rock hard cocks... i... o-ohhh..."
Slick Interview
Aura believed in hands-on, show-don't-tell examples in many situations. she stood up from her chair; its gas cylinder chuffed in relief and the seat rose an inch.
2019-05-31 - Anything Goes (Vel'Gahrus)
"so go ahead; ever heard the mantra of show, don't tell?" the invitation gave ilorek all the motivation he needed to take his first move which then carried on to motivate him right through to the end of his first climax.
The Metronome [Hypno Futa TFTG]
And as is my wont, i went out of my way to introduce several minor writing style errors that would hopefully make you feel a little uncomfortable, such as violating "show don't tell" by showing and telling, and not consistently hyphenating the labels.