Intro To N'zarr Plains
#1 of n'zaar plains story set up, need feedback. atra, the largest and most guarded of all the town in the vast plains region. the city is surrounded by thirty feet high thick stone walls.
The Wolf's Watch
I'd still appreciate some feedback. "time is short, and, i know you're listening, so, i'll make this quick..." the pain, it still remained. much less than the soul-crushing agony, but still, present.
Cascaded Guardians
I'm excited for this to be my first upload onto sf, and i hope to hear feedback! also, the artwork is not mine.
Boo!
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication. i'm watching you within this bush, preparing for a quick ambush. now did my appearance frighten, and did your rosy cheeks whiten?
chapter 1:meeting the squad
#1 of military series chapter 1 is finally here hope you guys love and enjoy comment down in the comments and give feedback on what you think as camper walked off the bus that brought him to the military bootcamp.
a time to stop *prolougue
I would love to see feedback on this and this is my first story > **im not your average american teeageer you see im a werewolf and this is how it happened .
Watershed
I i get sufficient feedback (comments are best as always) ill continue. if not, i give up and i think i'll just pe writers block squash me like a bug. on the note: watershed: a turning point "sir, she has every quality requested..."
Animalia
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication. i've watched the animals at play, they have their love on full display, compassion before simple needs, with lover critter spends the day.
The great escape ( well more like attempt) pt2
feedback is welcome 3 days earlier.. hi i'm terry. i'm 16 and i'm 5'9. i'm a wolf and the majority of my fur is white except for the black patch on my right eye. i read to myself aloud. my cell mate noticed this.
KoB - Kiss of Blood - Intro
Fan art of the story can be made as long as dominion69 and the story are credited. 1 // praise the author. 2 // leave your opinions and feedback if you have any. 3 // the story will progress over time, please do not rush. 4 // the author is not responsible
Dear Clip, Chapter 1
Any feedback is welcome, please leave any thoughts or suggestions as comments. it helps tremendously.
Reflections
The feedback on salazzle dazzle has been stellar thus far, and... honestly, it's restored a lot of my faith in my own writing.