Whispering Twins (Part 22)

Fuck shit, pickles and a basket of bottles of mary sues, what the fuck am i supposed to do?! i didn't think this through near as well as i should have! just... take a deep breath... he inhaled deeply, "uh... j-just turn to your left... and...

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Heart of the Forest ~ Chapter 14

I've been worried that he's pretty dang close to a mary sue, especially since now he's got this bangin' hot wolf goddess constantly lusting and teasing at him, but then peegus said - "well, all she ever does when she shows up is make his job harder", so i

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Whispering Twins (Part 9)

Shit biscuits and a mary sue, damn it!' "ready to go zay... you okay," she asked. he turned, her head tilted gently, "yee... yeah i guess." he tossed his tail, coiling it with zayras as she came up beside him.

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Family Guy- Brian becomes Lois

I'm sorry; i didn't realize your name was mary sue!" brian scoffed, and sat right back down on that bench, so what if he farted? it was a normal thing to do, yet one lone fart made that girl run away.

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The Esoteric Collapse (BOOK 2)

She's not just some super powerful mary sue, after all. she can be manipulated, she has emotions and desires that cannot be satisfied due to needing nightly trysts to stay alive. let's see how she grows as a character throughout this story, shall we?

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Hero Chapter 2

Side note: like i said before, this is my "mary sue" story, i think. it's based on an old romantic fantasy of mine, and...as such, jacob is basically me. just...a little cooler.

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Ultra Diaper Heroes

Don't go being a mary sue on us." "my weakness is you not shutting up." the equine walked over to another chair and took a seat on it. she put those pitch black hooves up and leaned back on the chair.

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What the heart once owned - Ch 1 - On the other side

Me on the other hand, was the mary sue of the two; always played by the book and followed all the rules. it's safe to say that we differ from each other as day and night.

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Patterson: A Heart as Warm as His Padding

"how can there be something worse than a mary sue?!" one teenager screamed when leaving the theater. "i can't even remember the movie!" sobbed another. "i have the ticket right here. what just happened? oh god, what's my name?"

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A Champions's Burden: An Elder Scrolls Tale

---------------------------- end notes: the character feels like a bit of a mary sue, but that's in the nature of the elder scrolls, i suppose. your hero character can do anything and everything.

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